That's some pretty weird phrasing and formating. The entire article was rewritten by one user in June—not extended, for no discernible reason. Judging by the us

That's some pretty weird phrasing and formating. The entire article was rewritten by one user in June—not extended, for no discernible reason. Judging by the user's page, they regularly contribute extensive-ishly, and plan to continue doing so. Meanwhile it seems they could use an editor who would clean up after them.