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If you literally just took out the "whews" and "ahs" from that sentence, you would completely change the meaning by removing the intended level of skepticism.
by Talanes 5y ago
If you literally just took out the "whews" and "ahs" from that sentence, you would completely change the meaning by removing the intended level of skepticism.
- awb 5y agoEvery sentence in the article is dripping with skepticism, those quips just put it over the top unnecessarily. The tone puts attention on the author, when the story is profound enough and makes a better focal point.
- Talanes 5y agoHonestly, I prefer my writing to be opinionated. Every author has an opinion, which means I'm going to waste energy trying to decipher their opinion from their facts if they present too neutrally.