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Amazing article and great persistence and research. Can’t wait to hear how it ends. My only gripe is the writing style, which I’ve started seeing on major news
by awb 5y ago
Amazing article and great persistence and research. Can’t wait to hear how it ends.
My only gripe is the writing style, which I’ve started seeing on major news sources that reads more like stream of consciousness or friend to friend rather than reporter to reader:
> Whew. It’s been quite a journey, but here we are at last at the real jumping-off point of this flooring company’s long transformation into a, ah, metaverse.
Take out the “Whews” and the “ahs”, etc., and it’s a really well written piece IMO.
- pkilgore 5y agoTo be fair, this is not the New York Times. It is a blog where the above-the-fold post today is "What did we get stuck in our rectums this year?"
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- ChrisMarshallNY 5y agoThat's how The Register[0] rolls. I really enjoy their style. They are also very sharp geeks. [0] https://theregister.co.uk https://theregister.co.uk
- Talanes 5y agoIf you literally just took out the "whews" and "ahs" from that sentence, you would completely change the meaning by removing the intended level of skepticism.
- awb 5y agoEvery sentence in the article is dripping with skepticism, those quips just put it over the top unnecessarily. The tone puts attention on the author, when the story is profound enough and makes a better focal point.
- Talanes 5y agoHonestly, I prefer my writing to be opinionated. Every author has an opinion, which means I'm going to waste energy trying to decipher their opinion from their facts if they present too neutrally.