"Slap a Story is a place for people like you and I; for people who like to read and write." Change to: "Slap a Story is a place for people like you and me: pe

"Slap a Story is a place for people like you and I; for people who like to read and write." Change to: "Slap a Story is a place for people like you and me: people who like to read and write." I mean, writing sites need some self-respect. I'm a bit anal about writing sites online: I think they're all barking up the wrong tree, yours included. I think that we have places for people who want to write silly texts: forums games are ideal. This site doesn't do anything to solve that. But I'll ignore that and focus on the actual site. You've got a good text-to-image ratio. No pictures associated with stories. That's good, because I hate sites that think visuals have anything to do with writing. I don't like how your numbers clip off on the side. I don't know why you need ranking to begin with. I can't say much more: it's ripping features off of Digg, visual quirks off of several sites, and it has a tag cloud. Beyond the concept, the site has a pretty standard layout. I can't criticize that other than to say that it does nothing whatsoever for me, and it's entirely undistinguished. Please, though: for the sake of pretending to respect the medium, style your stories up a bit. Make them look nice. Use different line spacing for paragraphs, use a font that actually looks nice. When your medium is text, not doing anything to style text is just silly. Hope that helps. Feel free to respond if you think I'm being unfair.