> Beautifully written top-notch orwellian poetry. Seriously inspiring. yeah, that paragraph was probably the best one. all in all i find this text really pain

> Beautifully written top-notch orwellian poetry. Seriously inspiring. yeah, that paragraph was probably the best one. all in all i find this text really painful to read. main issues: - a lot of sentences feel superfluous, like time-wasting boilerplate - poor grammar, punctuation and paragraph structure disrupt the reading flow - there is little logical structure or flow of arguments - there is far too much repetition