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In addition to what others have said, there are many grammatical errors/oddities that make it clear this was not written by a native English speaker. That may o
by kevinventullo 5y ago
In addition to what others have said, there are many grammatical errors/oddities that make it clear this was not written by a native English speaker. That may or may not matter depending on your target audience, but if it does, I would get a native speaker to edit the whole thing.