How should I have phrased the first line any other way, and not appear arrogant. The original: "A bigger point here is how we all mistook the results." Sugges

How should I have phrased the first line any other way, and not appear arrogant. The original: "A bigger point here is how we all mistook the results." Suggested revision: "It's odd that an article that now appears mistaken originally received over 600 upvotes. I wonder how many people would downvote it, given the chance."