I think the two “stories” were edited down a bit too much and are missing background information that isn’t technically relevant to the story but makes it diffi

I think the two “stories” were edited down a bit too much and are missing background information that isn’t technically relevant to the story but makes it difficult to follow because we have no context. Once I read the linked stories in points 1. and 2. at the top the rest made a lot more sense. I don’t think it’s fair to assume readers will click on links and read the linked material in full though. Most readers don’t even finish reading the article they’re currently reading!