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I find this writing style really hard to follow.
by chairmanwow1 5y ago
I find this writing style really hard to follow.
- gumby 5y agoWhat about it? Seemed pretty straightforward to me.
- tonyarkles 5y agoThis is possibly me projecting my own biases into the author's writing, but the specific style of "some paragraphs made up of only a single long sentence, some paragraphs made up of a few small sentences" reminds me very much of the ADHD folks I know and their writing style.
- elliekelly 5y agoI think the two “stories” were edited down a bit too much and are missing background information that isn’t technically relevant to the story but makes it difficult to follow because we have no context. Once I read the linked stories in points 1. and 2. at the top the rest made a lot more sense. I don’t think it’s fair to assume readers will click on links and read the linked material in full though. Most readers don’t even finish reading the article they’re currently reading!
- kldavis4 5y agoI agree. He seems to go off on tangents all over the place without reaching clear conclusions about the original topic.