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The only character in the first book who exhibited any kind of personality was the gruff cop who swears, doesn't care if he's not allowed to smoke inside, and t
by psychometry 5y ago
The only character in the first book who exhibited any kind of personality was the gruff cop who swears, doesn't care if he's not allowed to smoke inside, and takes no shit from anyone. It's almost laughable how bad the author is at characterization.
- Hoasi 5y ago> It's almost laughable how bad the author is at characterization. Isn't that part of the charm of the book, though? The characters are not as strong individually as they could be, but that fits the society they find themselves in.
- psychometry 5y agoNo, I don't think there's an excuse for anyone writing this badly.
- Hoasi 5y agoFair enough. There is still the possibility that something got lost in translation.