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Either way, his writing could use more organizing. Brevity would considerably broaden his readership.
by himaraya 5y ago
Either way, his writing could use more organizing. Brevity would considerably broaden his readership.
- bawolff 5y agoI didn't find it disorganized. There seemed to be a clear progression of ideas and it kept my interest throughout. Readership isn't everything. The best way to appeal to a broad base is to say nothing of import; i'm not sure a pared down version would be as interesting a piece.
- himaraya 5y agoReadership remains a side effect of respect for other people's time, which concise writing delivers, in contrast to rambling.