4 ms·
Eugene could really use an editor for his top-notch insights.
by himaraya 5y ago
Eugene could really use an editor for his top-notch insights.
- icelancer 5y agoHe has one. Perhaps it's not enough.
- himaraya 5y agoHis writing needs more aggressive editing, for sure.
- mdoms 5y agoI got about a third of the way through the article and gave up. If there's anything "top notch" in that mess it's certainly not in that portion of the piece.
- bawolff 5y agoIt's a bit rambly, but that seems more like a stylistic choice than a flaw.
- himaraya 5y agoEither way, his writing could use more organizing. Brevity would considerably broaden his readership.
- bawolff 5y agoI didn't find it disorganized. There seemed to be a clear progression of ideas and it kept my interest throughout. Readership isn't everything. The best way to appeal to a broad base is to say nothing of import; i'm not sure a pared down version would be as interesting a piece.
- himaraya 5y agoReadership remains a side effect of respect for other people's time, which concise writing delivers, in contrast to rambling.