Great fast fix -- I'm not sure you need someone professional but hopefully your potential customers convert long before they get down to the bottom of the page!

Great fast fix -- I'm not sure you need someone professional but hopefully your potential customers convert long before they get down to the bottom of the page! :) [EDIT] - Two more things: - "Heyy" in the page title - "we know you'll love [IndiePaper]" might be better than "it". Getting your project's name to stick in heads is probably easier with more mentions