It looks like you have some interesting concepts. But I'm unable to follow any of it. If you try to make each sentence into a paragraph on its own, and then cop

It looks like you have some interesting concepts. But I'm unable to follow any of it. If you try to make each sentence into a paragraph on its own, and then copyedit to get rid of the extra words, as well as to dumb down the phrases which (probably) sound sophisticated to you by two levels or more, I promise I will give it a lot of time and full attention. Pinky swear. Is the android an effeminate space hero? Or someone else? What does the acclaim have to do with any of it? Stumbling on the very first sentence.