Zed A. Shaw wrote a short critique: http://oppugn.us/posts/1272050135.html http://oppugn.us/posts/1272050135.html . One part of it is rather against Mark Pilgri

Zed A. Shaw wrote a short critique: http://oppugn.us/posts/1272050135.html http://oppugn.us/posts/1272050135.html . One part of it is rather against Mark Pilgrims unwillingness to update it than against technical points.