Oh, yeah? Well you should focus more on improving yourself than on the perceived faults in others! Start with better definitions for things. Sort out goals fro

Oh, yeah? Well you should focus more on improving yourself than on the perceived faults in others! Start with better definitions for things. Sort out goals from standards, maybe. Also, maybe rethink "anchor points." And the intermittent boldness, while possibly a metaphor for your struggle, is annoying.