I wish this could be retitled "The response from those with a vested interest in war to 9/11 contributed to a national decline affecting those who don't hold st

I wish this could be retitled "The response from those with a vested interest in war to 9/11 contributed to a national decline affecting those who don't hold stock in those companies or whom don't benefit financially." Admittedly, it is less readable, but it seems entirely more accurate.