"Monster Coloring Book is like fingerpainting without the mess." Mess is good! :D But it looks fun and the monsters are nice. Tip: increase the contrast of yo

"Monster Coloring Book is like fingerpainting without the mess." Mess is good! :D But it looks fun and the monsters are nice. Tip: increase the contrast of your navigation items. My parents/grandparents can't read that too well. Also: maybe aim your pitch at the user instead of the parent a bit more.