You added fluff! Concision is important. Here’s how I would put this: > Separately, we tested overall overlap and similarities in spatial structuring among Ind

You added fluff! Concision is important. Here’s how I would put this: > Separately, we tested overall overlap and similarities in spatial structuring among Indigenous language families and bear genetic groups using analysis of similarities (ANOSIM) and multivariate analysis of variance (MANOVA). That said, I found it quite readable, though I would have liked more inline math/diagrams/maps.