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"WTF", "badass", "retardedly", and "no-bullshit" aren't exactly light and un-intimidating.

• dorkitude 15y ago
  thanks for the feedback; we definitely agree it will be off-putting to certain kinds of clients luckily for us, those are the kinds of clients we don't want to deal with right now :) EDIT: replaced 'retardedly' with 'ludicrously', thanks!
• circlejtp 15y ago
  In fact it makes one question whether or not to have a conversation. Meaning, do I want to even do business this way? Will they treat me that same way as a customer? I get the vibe, I do. But if you really want to help businesses (B2B in your post), then you have to make it business friendly. Startups are a business and I suspect that is your market. But that rough approach may give you trouble expanding beyond that market.
  • dorkitude 15y ago
    Point very much taken I've tried to tone the copy down quite a bit What do you think now?
    • circlejtp 15y ago
      Looks great!