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I'm not the target audience but wanted to chime in with a few things about the design and copy: * Why is the iPhone 3 times larger than an iPad? I got a little
by mitjak 15y ago
I'm not the target audience but wanted to chime in with a few things about the design and copy:
* Why is the iPhone 3 times larger than an iPad? I got a little confused the first time the site loaded trying to figure out what the giant black device behind the iPad is.
* "Signup Now". English isn't my native language but I'm fairly certain "signup" is a noun, and you want the verb or "sign up" instead
* "Zigzag Cloud has powered built-in analytics". Powered by what? Or is it "powerful"?
* Love the logo and the colour scheme of the site!!
- sixty 15y agothis is a classic hacker's critique. Let's look at your comments from a user's point of view: > Why is the iPhone 3 times larger than an iPad? Irrelevant. Users won't care. > "Signup Now". English isn't my native language ... Irrelevant. Users won't care. > "Zigzag Cloud has powered built-in analytics". Powered by what? Or is it "powerful"? Irrelevant. Users won't care. > Love the logo and the colour scheme of the site!! Relevant. Users will care :)
- jasongullickson 15y agoThis is "Hacker News", not "User News".
- sixty 15y agoSo user perspectives aren't welcome?
- jasongullickson 15y agoI'm just saying that criticizing someones feedback because it characterizes the audience of the site is illogical.
- sixty 15y agofair enough. mitjak did also warn he/she wasn't the target audience.
- mitjak 15y agoThis is Hacker News. schappim came to ask for critique of his website. I have provided critique and pointed out mistakes in the website. There's a chance I'm wrong but I think I've provided exactly what the author was looking for when he posted the link here.
- schappim 15y agoHi Mitjak, Great feedback, you're english is certainly better than any of my second languages! You've picked up some typos and areas where we can fix our copy, we'll get onto that ASAP! Thanks, Marcus