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I wonder if that feedback was about technical knowledge, or just the style he writes in. I would 100% characterize his style as “someone who thinks he’s smart”.
by soared 5y ago
I wonder if that feedback was about technical knowledge, or just the style he writes in. I would 100% characterize his style as “someone who thinks he’s smart”. I don’t mean that to be totally offensive, only a little bit.
> One of the interesting things for me about this shared space of ours is to be able to see what it is that you most enjoy
This is pretty clearly a backwards way of writing a normal American English sentence.
- whimsicalism 5y agoThis is a very common problem. He could just use an editor/trusted friend who has experience writing for pop audiences.