> looking back .. minimally satisfies .. is hard to read Interesting. I wonder if there is an analogy to the first draft of a book. Everything needs "editing"

> looking back .. minimally satisfies .. is hard to read Interesting. I wonder if there is an analogy to the first draft of a book. Everything needs "editing" -- that is a given. Some writing only needs line editing; some needs a restructuring, a rewrite, etc.