I don't know, this might be good way to explain your idea to a non-investor but for VC's I've read the opposite: http://www.businessinsider.com/entrepreneurs-do

I don't know, this might be good way to explain your idea to a non-investor but for VC's I've read the opposite: http://www.businessinsider.com/entrepreneurs-dont-tell-an-investor-your-startup-is-like-company-x-for-y-2010-7 http://www.businessinsider.com/entrepreneurs-dont-tell-an-in... I think instead you can better form your pitch like this: http://techcrunch.com/2010/11/03/madlibs-pitch-adeo-ressi-founder-institute/ http://techcrunch.com/2010/11/03/madlibs-pitch-adeo-ressi-fo...