Wouldn't a better title be: Psychotic symptoms across a range of psychiatric disorders in midlife preceeded by perceptual distortions in late teens in xx perce

Wouldn't a better title be: Psychotic symptoms across a range of psychiatric disorders in midlife preceeded by perceptual distortions in late teens in xx percent of cases, exclusive of circumstances concomitant with perceptual distortion but not psychosis such as ptsd, synesthesia, autism, genius, artistic talent, prescription, drug, alcohol use, trauma, poverty, poor nutrition, health issues, the world actually being tilted...