It's clear whoever put this together put a lot of effort into making the page fancy and there are some nice effects there, but it ultimately harms the message.

It's clear whoever put this together put a lot of effort into making the page fancy and there are some nice effects there, but it ultimately harms the message. Here is some concrete feedback: - WebKit lets you make custom scrollbars if that's important to you: http://www.webkit.org/blog/363/styling-scrollbars/ http://www.webkit.org/blog/363/styling-scrollbars/ . Using a real scrollbar means that shortcuts I'm familiar with (e.g. shift-space to page up -- wow, I had no idea how frequently I used this until this page broke it) won't break. - Whitespace is nice, but the double-spaced-feeling line-height combined with the "back to founders fund" heading at the top combine to make it feel uncomfortably cramped vertically -- not enough information density per page. - Similarly, the lines are so wide they are uncomfortable to read. (I actually use a user stylesheet that limits lines to 50em, which makes many sites including HN more readable.) I'm sorry I don't have any feedback on the content, I was too distracted to start reading it yet.