I thought the article was well written. Can I suggest trying again? The point was not tho explain HOW to avoid planes crashing, it was to explain how he saw hi

I thought the article was well written. Can I suggest trying again? The point was not tho explain HOW to avoid planes crashing, it was to explain how he saw his job not that of providing super-clear weather reports ,but focusing the reports on factors that would cause problems for pilots.