> if it is to extend that ban to other countries the author should say so The article explicitly states this in no uncertain terms as the final sentence in the

> if it is to extend that ban to other countries the author should say so The article explicitly states this in no uncertain terms as the final sentence in the paragraph you are talking about: "I see no good reason that [animal testing for cosmetics] should not be banned totally and everywhere." I agree that the article is unfocused. However for the specific issues you are mentioning here, it is simple to search the article to see if the author has covered the relevant point you are making.