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Perhaps we need fewer words to make it clearer. I feel that "First" photo in the original title is a red herring. And not really something you can prove with e
by cydonian_monk 15y ago
Perhaps we need fewer words to make it clearer. I feel that "First" photo in the original title is a red herring. And not really something you can prove with ease. Maybe somebody else has taken just such a photo but never released it? Or has never realized it was a photo of a fish using a tool?
I suggest: "Tool-using fish photograped by diver."
Or that we find a new language to work in.
- ggchappell 15y agoAll good points. Note, however, that, while "tool-using fish" is clear in writing, if you say it, you might mean that the tool uses the fish. Another effort: Fish uses tool. Diver photographs the fish. OR Diver photographs fish, while fish uses tool.
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- jodrellblank 15y agoAnd your efforts might imply that the photographs depict only the fish and not the tool or the tool use. Diver photographs tool-use by fish?