A better way to structure the article would be: - explain how much tax evasion took place - explain how the tax evasion happens - who is doing it - what to

A better way to structure the article would be: - explain how much tax evasion took place - explain how the tax evasion happens - who is doing it - what to do next. Only then, compare the situation to the average person. Everyone knows how much they pay in taxes themselves. This video does a better job at explaining the tax loophole: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8pBPZMUcsh0 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8pBPZMUcsh0