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Initial thoughts, it looks good. It definitely has the feel of a real newspaper site. The writing isn't quite as polished. The ideas are good, but every so ofte
by AMathmagician 15y ago
Initial thoughts, it looks good. It definitely has the feel of a real newspaper site. The writing isn't quite as polished. The ideas are good, but every so often you hit a sentence that makes you go "What?" An example is in the story on Rand Paul and GPS. You quote him as saying "The American people should be free to literally chart their own course without the inferring hand of the government getting in their way." But I believe you meant "interfering" rather than "inferring". It's not a huge error, but it's enough to make you stop for a second, breaking the flow. All in all, I'd give it a 7 out of 10.
- aorshan 15y agoGood point on the Rand Paul article. We have a few editors but obviously stuff slips through. Thanks for the praise though.