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I read this a decade ago, and tried to practice it. The only problem is that people pay less attention because you don't sound as impressive... OTOH maybe I ca
by 13ren 18y ago
I read this a decade ago, and tried to practice it. The only problem is that people pay less attention because you don't sound as impressive...
OTOH maybe I can recommend it: using this approach, I did win a prize for an essay-based subject (non-computer science)... And there was another essay I wrote that one lecturer gave to another lecturer to read because it was so "stimulating".
BTW: Orwell mentions "dead metaphors". There's a really cool rhetorical device called "reviving a dead metaphor". A simple way to do this is to take mixed (dead) metaphors and unmix them. The impact can be strikingly visceral.
\EDIT {it's all coming back to me now... when I used metaphors in this way, they became true isomorphisms, revealing a much deeper and more informative - and even predictive - correspondence. For an example, note that the desktop metaphor is itself a dead metaphor that is also an isomorphism.}
Finally: Orwell did not do well romantically. It makes one think twice about emulating him. I try to remember this test before following advice :-)
- astrec 18y agoThe only problem is that people pay less attention because you don't sound as impressive... But as the brothers Heath show us in "Made to Stick", nobody will recall what you actually said.