> Why include the word "women" at all, though? Because that description was specifically to highlight how different his then-girlfriend was from them. > Repla

> Why include the word "women" at all, though? Because that description was specifically to highlight how different his then-girlfriend was from them. > Replace it with "jews" or "gays" and see how it reads. "Most gays in the Bay Area are lame, but my current boyfriend is great." - seems fine?