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The chase, if you'll forgive the worn metaphor: > But one can often be in doubt about the effect of a word or a phrase, and one needs rules that one can rely o
by slowmovintarget 6y ago
The chase, if you'll forgive the worn metaphor:
> But one can often be in doubt about the effect of a word or a phrase, and one needs rules that one can rely on when instinct fails. I think the following rules will cover most cases:
i. Never use a metaphor, simile or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.
ii. Never use a long word where a short one will do.
iii. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
iv. Never use the passive where you can use the active.
v. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
vi. Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.
- mscharrer 6y ago> iv. Never use the passive where you can use the active. One example i see quite often is: "X has been widely criticized for Y", with no mention of either the critics or the argument.