Glad you found the site. Your feedback is immensely helpful! We've been struggling a bit by being too general. I think I need to revise the language to be more

Glad you found the site. Your feedback is immensely helpful! We've been struggling a bit by being too general. I think I need to revise the language to be more focused for the tech-savvy parent segment that we're targeting as our early adopters. Your feedback makes it clear that our current iteration lacks proper customer segment focus and doesn't sell the benefits well enough to compel you to take a chance on signing up. Thanks for this valuable insight, dadads.