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I hope the attempt worked. I was trying to find how the new title related to the original one and was skimming the article in the process. It didn't seem that,

I hope the attempt worked. I was trying to find how the new title related to the original one and was skimming the article in the process. It didn't seem that, well...peaceful?

dang 6y ago
It didn't work. I originally wrote "feeble and doomed" but then felt embarrassed for using 4 adjectives in 1 sentence.