It's not clear to me who this product is for and what you are getting for your money. Doesn't even mention the apps included. -- What problem are you solving an

It's not clear to me who this product is for and what you are getting for your money. Doesn't even mention the apps included. -- What problem are you solving and who has that problem? Reword and restructure the site to target them. -- You mention "studio" and music/animation/photo editing so you might be losing the moms ands aunts that wanna speed up their old laptop. -- There are many many live linux distros out there that you just install on a usb and you're done. Most are open source and from well known developers, you need to help people understand why anyone would pay for for your version.