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The writing is disjointed and does not easily flow. It's too curt and while that's alright for a casual i.e., HN audience, if that's how one communicates in ot
by stevenhuang 6y ago
The writing is disjointed and does not easily flow.
It's too curt and while that's alright for a casual i.e., HN audience, if that's how one communicates in other contexts there will be miscommunication.
- lkm93 6y agoAnd you just used "i.e." incorrectly. Congratulations. Hey snakedoctor! You're probably not a sociopathic, autistic, illiterate narcissist like everyone here is telling you. For one, your writing is just fine, and beyond that any of your bad decisions can simply be explained by youth and (understandable) desperation. I would suggest staying away from HN for life advice. People here might have some money but, aside from that, they are mostly low-intelligence failures.