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Looks promising, although some information about what you actually plan to do, would be good. Also, if you want to make an impact with a page in English, I wou
by ggchappell 15y ago
Looks promising, although some information about what you actually plan to do, would be good.
Also, if you want to make an impact with a page in English, I would strongly recommend that you run it by a native speaker.
In particular:
> This we will take care of — by fixing the way how the daily therapy works.
Definitely not. Perhaps "We will take care of this - by fixing the way daily therapy works."
- Fdebong 15y agoOh dear, that's a n00b error. Thanks for pointing it out to me.