I somewhat agree. Not just jargon, but the author has an impressive vocabulary and may be putting it ahead of readability. One concrete example: "Our work sho

I somewhat agree. Not just jargon, but the author has an impressive vocabulary and may be putting it ahead of readability. One concrete example: "Our work shows" would work just as well as "our work elucidates". It's ultimately up to the author, but that kind of word choice really doesn't add anything and makes the paper less accessible to non-native speakers.