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This is great! I just rewrote all my chapters' first paragraph[^1] using the first advice of this article. I'll give back by sharing an advice I learned from p
by baby 6y ago
This is great! I just rewrote all my chapters' first paragraph[^1] using the first advice of this article.
I'll give back by sharing an advice I learned from ptatcek: the inverted pyramid.[^2]
Here's some example of what I just re-wrote.
Chapter 2:
- I have talked about cryptographic primitives in the previous chapter, they are constructions that achieve specific security properties and form the building blocks of cryptography.
- In the first part of this book you will learn about several important ones.
+ Attributing global unique identifiers to anything, that's the promise of the first cryptographic construction
chapter 3:
- In chapter 2, you've learned about an interesting construction --hash functions--that on its own doesn't provide much, but if used in combination with a secure channel allows you to verify the authenticity and integrity of some data.
+ Mix a hash function with a secret key, and you obtain something called a *message authentication code (MAC)*.
chapter 4:
- You've learned about authenticated encryption in chapter 4, which is a form of symmetric encryption.
- This is an extremely useful cryptographic primitive, yet in the real-world, there exist many situations where different peers do not have a shared secret.
+ In chapter 4 you learned about authenticated encryption, a cryptographic primitive used to encrypt data but limited by its symmetry: both sides of a connection had to share the same key.
+ In this chapter, I'll lift this restriction by introducing *asymmetric encryption*: a primitive to encrypt to someone else's key without knowing the key.
chapter 12:
- For as far as I can remember, the term "crypto" has been used in reference to the field of cryptography.
- Recently, I have seen its meaning quickly changing and being used by more and more people to refer to *cryptocurrencies*.
+ Can cryptography be the basis for a new financial system?
+ This is what cryptocurrencies have been trying to answer since at least 2008, when Bitcoin was proposed by Satoshi Nakamoto (who to this day has yet to reveal their identity).
[^1]: https://www.manning.com/books/real-world-cryptography?a_aid=Realworldcrypto&a_bid=ad500e09 https://www.manning.com/books/real-world-cryptography?a_aid=...
[^2]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Inverted_pyramid_(journalism) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Inverted_pyramid_(journalism)
- mimischi 6y agoHave a look at “The art of writing science” by Kevin W. Plaxco [1]. He goes over this and similar techniques in length, applying them at the same time. [1] https://doi.org/10.1002/pro.514 https://doi.org/10.1002/pro.514