The first lesson in the article gave me a junior high flashback. We were supposed to organize our paragraphs into the form: Introductory Sentence Concrete d

The first lesson in the article gave me a junior high flashback. We were supposed to organize our paragraphs into the form: Introductory Sentence Concrete detail Commentary Commentary Concrete detail Commentary Commentary Concrete detail Commentary Commentary Concluding sentence —- next paragraph It works, but writing that way was such a toil. Sometimes there is no value in 2 sentences of commentary and sometimes more explanation is needed. Sometimes it’s best to present three details all at once, instead of one by one. My teacher lifted the requirement on me after I ignored the rule but still wrote a quality essay.