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It's a fantastic idea, but the landing page is more complicated than it needs to be. I suggest embedding a demo video of someone using the product. A 30-45 sec
by 29athrowaway 6y ago
It's a fantastic idea, but the landing page is more complicated than it needs to be.
I suggest embedding a demo video of someone using the product. A 30-45 second video ideally.
Make the page about the product, being as upfront as possible. This is the product, this is what it does, this is how you can access it.
For example, the way Apple does it: https://www.apple.com/iphone-12/ https://www.apple.com/iphone-12/ ... First thing you see is the product itself... then what it does, then how you can buy it (Apple used to be better at making these pages btw).
- VelNZ 6y agoThanks for the feedback! I tried to make it clear what the product does in the How It Works section at the top of the home page and a few simplified screenshots further down, but perhaps that's not visual enough. I personally like when products have short GIFs on the home page highlighting the main features of the product. I did want to produce a GIF like that before launch, but I've spent over 6 years of my spare time working on Creodocs and I just really wanted to get it out already. I know I can pay someone to make the video, but since the product is likely to change visually, I'd like to learn to do it myself so I can remake the video after visual changes. Any suggestions for software to use?
- 29athrowaway 6y agoYou can start by making screencast of you editing a document, then visualizing the rendered document. You can use your browser in full screen mode and OBS for that. Then, you can edit the video and remove any delays and stuff like that.