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Instead of "PlusApps.eu" in the upper left, I would place the name of the app itself. Should the app name be "Earthquake Monitor" without an 's'? First paragr
by fieldforceapp 15y ago
Instead of "PlusApps.eu" in the upper left, I would place the name of the app itself.
Should the app name be "Earthquake Monitor" without an 's'?
First paragraph syntax, an extra space before the period "Seismological Centre ."
Also what's the unique value here: is it real time notifications, or the graphic display, or something else? What ever that key unique feature is, make that the one thing you highlight.
To do this, I would change the structure of the landing page slightly: move the "Features" section down (there are too many features here that take away from your key feature) and insert one big "key feature" section there instead.
For example, if the key feature is real time notifications, put a static info graphic there to explain why that feature along is worth purchase price. And all the other features are, therefore, a "bonus" for the price.