Does anybody any HBR know how to write a clear headed statement? You can tell by the little mistakes that the writer is not thinking hard enough, and only writi

Does anybody any HBR know how to write a clear headed statement? You can tell by the little mistakes that the writer is not thinking hard enough, and only writing to flex. Lines like this, for example: "Now, in the past, these efforts might have impacted technology that only involved the consumption of movies and music." Now! In the past! Together at last!