I mean his writing is understandable, but it's not good writing. To this native English speaker, the sentences are a bit "Janet & John" - very short, very few c

I mean his writing is understandable, but it's not good writing. To this native English speaker, the sentences are a bit "Janet & John" - very short, very few compound versions. It's fine for his purpose, or in say a manual for a microwave. You can compare this with the writing of Patio11, which often seems to be the opposite extreme - chains of double negatives, obscure words etc etc.