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For kicks, I threw a few paragraphs from The old man and the sea to see if the editor displayed any deference to its namesake. Red all over, "very hard to read"
by sleepydog 6y ago
For kicks, I threw a few paragraphs from The old man and the sea to see if the editor displayed any deference to its namesake. Red all over, "very hard to read", "use of the passive voice".
- aerovistae 6y agoI didn't try that one-- I put in Hills Like White Elephants and it was mostly okay.