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Your call to action is too vague regarding the details and intended audience for me to part with my email address. The blog post is slightly more helpful--it l
by khafra 15y ago
Your call to action is too vague regarding the details and intended audience for me to part with my email address.
The blog post is slightly more helpful--it lets me know that, as an apartment-dweller with only one electricity utility available, I probably have no use for your service.
I'd suggest narrowing your focus, and proofreading the blog post.
- ieatlobster 15y agoThanks for the feedback. I guess the question is, do you know where your electricity comes from? And if you could choose where your electricity comes from would you care to change? If you could vote for certain fuel sources over others would you exercise that choice?