Having had a quick look, I don't think the original document is particularly offensive, or particularly funny. It's a bit meh to me, and I think either deleting

Having had a quick look, I don't think the original document is particularly offensive, or particularly funny. It's a bit meh to me, and I think either deleting it, or re-writing it to be funny was the right thing to do, and obviously deleting it won in the end. A long term successful attempt at using humour in a serious subject would be something like 'How to Lie with Statistics' (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_to_Lie_with_Statistics https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_to_Lie_with_Statistics). I think humour can help dry subjects, and lets face it, encrypting save files in a game engine isn't exactly the most riveting of subjects so some humour will probably help.