Your comment is very difficult to read and understand. The sentences are too long and borders on purple prose. There are too many strands of thought packed into

Your comment is very difficult to read and understand. The sentences are too long and borders on purple prose. There are too many strands of thought packed into a single sentence. I understand you are saying that you discovered some potential government fraud, and that homeless Londoners are being recruited by organised criminals, but not how the two are related.